tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4700173600990898437.post2731476602854968788..comments2010-01-03T02:39:39.654-08:00Comments on Urban Geometry: Misplaced WordsLuther James Spellshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00707788080486867337noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4700173600990898437.post-78543753139601810632009-07-21T19:39:31.405-07:002009-07-21T19:39:31.405-07:00amazing! This one has to be spoken to feel it rum...amazing! This one has to be spoken to feel it rumble. The rhythm is impeccable as an A train hurtling into the station. The turn of phrase, the voices unheard. I love this piece!gabriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4700173600990898437.post-17818861983332638192009-07-21T15:55:08.582-07:002009-07-21T15:55:08.582-07:00This is a wonderful poem. I like the dark power o...This is a wonderful poem. I like the dark power of the words and phrases. This is one of my favorite of yours.Pamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08765105091538770825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4700173600990898437.post-81184850336443536072009-07-20T13:48:23.782-07:002009-07-20T13:48:23.782-07:00wonderful piece
with great depth
sometimes my memo...wonderful piece<br />with great depth<br />sometimes my memory dims...Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4700173600990898437.post-81234019307283154022009-07-20T08:14:17.202-07:002009-07-20T08:14:17.202-07:00Wonderful. It is amazing what that inner voice can...Wonderful. It is amazing what that inner voice can do. Maybe it really does have a life of its own!SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4700173600990898437.post-61053744517738714012009-07-19T23:17:28.673-07:002009-07-19T23:17:28.673-07:00Bravo! A very fine creation indeed, amazing, how w...Bravo! A very fine creation indeed, amazing, how words can get to be so much powerful.. The starting two lines ("He stumbles as he reaches.. For words to reach for him") were awesome and the poem took off from there.. ballooning out beautifully to convey what was said, and a lot more that weren't..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4700173600990898437.post-834893729498580042009-07-19T10:09:57.382-07:002009-07-19T10:09:57.382-07:00These words pack a powerful punch...I loved the us...These words pack a powerful punch...I loved the use of "memory dim" and "darkly grim". This poem reads wonderfully out loud. Impressive, as always!Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.com