Sunday, October 18, 2009

Found Love


A lonely alley awaits
The struggling thoughts
She wonders as she seeks
A path to reach her calm
Quiet in her peacefulness
Dreaming
A new love will come
One with tenderness
For her to submit
And finally allow herself
To be the fruit
Of his conquer
©2009 LUTHER SPELLS
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9 comments:

  1. Loch RobOctober 18, 2009 at 10:09 AM

    The question becomes, "Who is waiting" in the disguise of wishful thinking? Daunting and provacative.

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  2. AnonymousOctober 18, 2009 at 12:24 PM

    very nice!!...
    i loved your take on the osi prompt...very clever!

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  3. sgreerpittOctober 18, 2009 at 1:24 PM

    those last three lines sing, the phrasing is unique and pulls the reader in.

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  4. Sherri B.October 18, 2009 at 1:25 PM

    Wandering the path of the unknown...I really enjoyed this. The photo only added to the mystery.

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  5. SandyCarlsonOctober 18, 2009 at 4:28 PM

    That can be a lonely walk and a long wait. Well done.

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  6. Tumblewords:October 19, 2009 at 11:33 AM

    Yes. A long and sometimes lonely walk - lovely words and imagery.

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  7. AnonymousOctober 19, 2009 at 7:23 PM

    A terrific piece on conquer... amazing use of the prompt!!

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  8. Tammie LeeOctober 21, 2009 at 10:35 PM

    lovely way of seeing conquer.

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  9. Cassiopeia RisesOctober 23, 2009 at 8:01 AM

    Oh but this is lovely. Your images just carry one along to the end. Well done.


    love,Melanie

    BTW, I have had to change my URL again
    I am now Cassiopeia Rises
    http://cassoiopeiarises.blogspot.con

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