Friday, November 27, 2009

Rehabilitation


Of past lives gone
To wish them away
Awakening to a better day
A cleansing of hate
And anger and crime
The new life is born
Migration of time
©2009 LUTHER SPELLS
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14 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 28, 2009 at 9:04 PM

    oh that is lovely take to the prompt..

    very nice..

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  2. AnonymousNovember 28, 2009 at 9:15 PM

    A powerful piece.. wonderful take on the prompt..

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  3. Rinkly RimesNovember 28, 2009 at 9:55 PM

    Those crushed flowers followed by your words speak powerfully.

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  4. AmityNovember 28, 2009 at 11:50 PM

    this is one unique take on the prompt!

    great one Luther! truly a migration of time!

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  5. AmityNovember 28, 2009 at 11:54 PM

    this is one unique take on the prompt!

    great one Luther! truly a migration of time!

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  6. MaggieNovember 29, 2009 at 3:08 AM

    A great migration poem which said so much.

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  7. SandyCarlsonNovember 29, 2009 at 4:39 AM

    Through time we migrate toward a new and renewed self. Beautiful poem, my friend.

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  8. Sherri B.November 29, 2009 at 5:20 AM

    Each line is so full...and the poem has a wonderful rhythm. Beautiful!

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  9. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)November 29, 2009 at 3:03 PM

    We all have dreams, and migrating towards them might just help them come true.

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  10. JukotaNovember 29, 2009 at 7:07 PM

    Great picture to go with the prompt... especially the rearview mirror, how can we look back if we haven't already moved forward, to a new place. Nice twist on the prompt.

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  11. Tammie LeeDecember 1, 2009 at 8:00 AM

    beautifully said and powerful~

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  12. Tumblewords:December 1, 2009 at 10:41 AM

    Lots to contemplate in this. Nice work.

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  13. PamDecember 2, 2009 at 10:00 AM

    Very interesting take on "migration". I enjoyed the refreshing view point.

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  14. AnonymousJanuary 3, 2010 at 2:39 AM

    Hey its been quite a while since you last posted.. hope everything is all right, and your time has been spent in a productive way!
    Wish you a very happy new year, friend.

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