Saturday, September 5, 2009

One Chance


How I have fallen
With just one glance
Our eyes meet softly
The spark ignites
We venture madly
To seal our night
Cornered by circumstance
Devoid of light
In silence I revel
Given just one chance
To live the love
Of this perfect romance
©2009 LUTHER SPELLS
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12 comments:

  1. spacedlawSeptember 5, 2009 at 9:53 PM

    Excellent, I love just the hint of tension and hope.
    Nice picture too.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2009 at 12:30 AM

    i second Spaced law,
    this was beautiful...! well written!

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  3. MaggieSeptember 6, 2009 at 5:06 AM

    I could almost feel the heat from the flames.

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  4. SandyCarlsonSeptember 6, 2009 at 5:43 AM

    Now, that is a gorgeous love poem. Oh, the lucky lady!

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  5. annalarssonphotographySeptember 6, 2009 at 6:32 AM

    Magic poem!!!!
    You are really talented!

    Love this poem!
    Anna

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  6. Sherri B.September 6, 2009 at 9:46 AM

    I felt passion, sadness, yearning...gorgeous poem.

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  7. bethanySeptember 6, 2009 at 11:45 AM

    This was quite lovely...

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  8. Cassiopeia RisesSeptember 8, 2009 at 10:24 AM

    Lovely and wonderful images fill my mind.


    love-Melanie-bhd

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  9. gabrielleSeptember 8, 2009 at 11:11 PM

    a magical aura is spun in this one chance. I was drawn to the dark quiet spaces.

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  10. Tammie LeeSeptember 10, 2009 at 9:29 AM

    perfect romance indeed, expressed beautifully with your words.

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 19, 2009 at 12:39 AM

    Perfectly captured in beautiful words. Enjoyed reading it.

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  12. AnonymousOctober 2, 2009 at 7:35 AM

    Loved the feel, the flow, the passion... and specially awed by your versatility when it comes to poetic genres..

    A perfect piece for a perfect romance, this.. A great read!!

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