Sunday, July 5, 2009

Brutal Stranger


This weapon for love
Strikes effective
Not selective
Brings her to a new
Objective
He fills her void
But travels softly
Reflective
Of past loves
In the range her
Memories once of
This brutal stranger
©2009 LUTHER SPELLS

9 comments:

  1. A brutal stranger indeed. Usually such strangers reflect the ideals of the holder.

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  2. Indeed, revolvers are ineffective but limit shell casing evidence thus making them "strangers" to their detection seekers.

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  3. This is intense. How anger and sorrow explode!

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  4. Ah, powerful piece of poetry, that paints intense emotions in bold hues! Simply amazing!

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  5. very powerful and such strong imagery

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  6. A striking contrast, the revolver to love.

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  7. Such contrast that your first line brings. Well written- very powerful indeed

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  8. This weapon for love, does it have deadly accuracy or dwell in the realm of memory? Multiple layers of meaning and merging of s/he stranger in this powerful piece!

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  9. It is of an aquaintance I draw this image. I see it in his words.

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